Tuesday, May 15, 2007

-=Still l0ve y0u=-


Love Is...A slight chance of heartbrake
Love is your first impression
The one time you find
That your mine
is caught off track
and thats one known fact
You shirt, tear stained
Your veins pump with
hopeless sorrow strained
the pain unbearably confusing
The heart hangs heavy
As it turns to lead
don't get your hopes up
You'll fell tradgecally dead
YOu eyes fill with dread
Who really cares much anway
Clood is on the bed
the rose you gave full of tyranny
Love is your biggest mistake
Love is your dying fate

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...Okay, Well that is based on how I feel about love.
Just tell me how the poem is. Short, yes. But I'd just like to know if its good...Don't judge it by the feelings....cuz thats just me for ya.

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